Could have been good.
This game could have been really fun, but you really messed up the timing, making it WAY too hard. It's almost like you have to press the button in the right frame.
This has been done before.. And you spelled 'neutral' wrong.
no. i didnt. i spelled it neutral.
keep on reading..
Hi there! I am currently enrolled in an animation course so I hope my imput helps out. First off, I'll say that this is probably the best tutorial in Newgrounds. However, this is what I hate about tutorials in this site. Practically all of them talk about their subjects in general terms, not in detail; yours has a bit of an exception, but barely. If I really wanted to learn about something in Flash, Photoshop, or whatever software, a tutorial here would be the last place I would look for, because I'll only be learning the subject at a VERY basic level. Sites like Flash kit, Total 3D, Keithlango; any tutorial based site beats checking out these tutorials. Sorry if I'm beating you up here, but it's true! You've talked about special animation a bit, but how about 'antics', 'followthroughs', 'squash and stretch', 'posing', 'timing', 'secondary action'... I can go on. You've touched the basics of everything you've talked about instead of giving detailed information that could be useful. To sum it up. The quantity of this "tutorial" is great! The quality of it is very questionable. I would rather see you focus on one topic, and give extreme details, instead of giving general information on a lot of topics, Like I said, though, this is probably the best tut in here.
I love the Crimsom games, so I compared this to them. Overall, it was pretty cool, but there are a few things that really pissed me off. The fact that a knife can cut through a garbage bin and a crate really sucked. I had to look it up from others to do those because a knife shouldn't have that capability. Plus, it's obvious that you put so much time in the graphics and actionscript, but your story skills suck ass, man. The door is lock 'for some reason'... that's really stupid, put more effort into the story, it'll make such a difference. Anyways good game.
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